[System]
Test your correctness with [System]. an absolutely innocent grammar exercise that has nothing to do with capitalism. I swear!
Please, have in mind this before playing if you are sensitive to:
- External violence
- Direct communication
- Grammatical errors
This game has been created with Twine, written and designed by Inés Alcolea.
Thanks for playing! I appreciate if you share & leave a comment!
Articles and external reviews of the game:
- [System], un juego desarrollado integramente por Inés Alcolea
- [System], el Pony Island español
- En un mundo posible, una versión de Borges programador
Updated | 7 days ago |
Published | 15 days ago |
Status | Released |
Platforms | HTML5 |
Rating | Rated 4.6 out of 5 stars (16 total ratings) |
Author | Ines Alcolea |
Genre | Interactive Fiction, Educational, Puzzle, Simulation, Visual Novel |
Made with | Twine |
Tags | Exploration, Horror, Narrative, Point & Click, Text based, Twine |
Average session | A few minutes |
Languages | English |
Inputs | Mouse, Touchscreen |
Accessibility | Color-blind friendly, Subtitles, One button |
Links | Twitter, Instagram |
Comments
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Está muy bien. Me he quedado regular, though, al hacer la primera frase (pero ya conocía el disclaimer).
Espero que al menos con el resto de finales te hayas entretenido :) Es durillo, sí, pero quería despertar algo. Algo que además sucede ahora mismo.
Interesting design
thanks a lot!! I am learning so any tip is welcomed!
Nice
thanks!
This game definitely caught me off guard. Nice game though. :)
Thanks and sorry at the same time!
Muy guay Ines! La mecánica de "ir contra la máquina" encaja muy bien con la historia. Y mola bastante cómo estás explorando la narrativa no lineal.
¡Muchísimas gracias! Quería hacer un poco de homenaje a metajugos que tanto me gustan y admiro ^^
super cool!
thanks for playing!
Me ha gustado mucho! creo que he sacado algún detallito rebuscado, y ha estado super bien.
Tengo en el fondo de la cabeza probar a hacer algo con twine ... a ver si saco tiempo para darle :)
Ay muchas gracias por jugar y comentar! Lánzate a probar! Haz algo divertido y sobre todo cómprate una pizarra para ver más visualmente todo!
Very interesting concept...
thanks for posting and playing!
Ines, qué pasada, de verdad. Vaya manera de jugar con el formato. <33
¡Muchísimas gracias! :D fue lo que más me costó realmente, ver de qué manera usar twine de una forma distinta. Muchísimas gracias por jugarlo :)
I'm not much of a fan of "Interactive Fiction", but I wanted to try this game... and I liked it.
I completely agree with the underlying message.
In summary, GG Ines!
Thanks for making this game!
Wow, thanks so much in a first place for trying and in a second place for commenting! I was very affraid that maybe the message is not well transmitted. Thanks a lot, this was something VERY personal.
Es increíble, me encanta la capacidad para
explotaral máximo la sencillez de Twine.ay gracias!! Me tiré mucho tiempo dándole vueltas a cómo usar twine de una forma más mecánica
You misspelt "hero" at one point.
Also, I can't scroll down on one of the paths...
Thanks for posting that! It was part of the warnings ;) hahah correcting it in the next build! Thaaaaaanks so much for playing!
Actually, that was a SPELLING error, so...
hahaha I know I was just jocking :) I will upload the new version soon ^^ thanks for reporting!
Oh shoot, I just noticed that reality was also misspelt!
in which part? I also corrected the scrolling thing! Thanks for the feedback!!
WHAT A !@#$